Critiques:
The tower may be taller to exaggerate a sense of sublime.
The drawing conventions used may not be correct.
Certain wall cut in the plan is not reasonable.(like the space beside the staircase)
Cut patterns of the Rock(earth) is not architectural, should be using a more realistic pattern or photoshop the sections.
Notice what happens in the connection between the wall and the roof.(junction details)
Poche drawings should be presented on opaque paper rather than tracing paper.
Some other thoughts:
We should keep in mind that this is not exclusively a form making exercise - it is an exercise in forming interior spaces
Even though this is not a form making exercise, there will be significant emphasis on form because composition of forms is essential to the formation of enclosure and composition of forms will often produce interesting conditions of gaps/openings/void/shafts/chasms that might provide the light/view quality you want
So, we might need to think of COMPOSITIONAL strategies like folding, stacking, carving, shifting, arranging and so on.
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